20 January 2010

Myaikus

comfortable bed
kids are late for school again
early morning fog

running in the snow
click click click crunch crunch crunch crunch
echoes through the trees

all these things I do
to try to forget your name
yet still it whispers
at

3 comments:

  1. LoriJanuary 20, 2010 at 8:27 AM

    Thanks for this exercise Kelly, it was fun. I tried to post a picture too but it took too long.

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  2. andiJanuary 20, 2010 at 4:31 PM

    Running in the snow. And you call me the overachiever. PTTTPHTH.

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  3. KikiJanuary 20, 2010 at 4:48 PM

    You both did a good job. Haiku is fun! I actually started a haiku thread on my tennis forum. I become famous for this one, about a particularly annoying player:

    Novak Djokovic:
    Irresistible charm? No.
    Arrogant cocksmack.

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